A Sonic Fan-Fiction Story

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Yup. You guessed it.

I so far have parts one through for written out. I've gotten two typed up on the computer at home, but when I tried to transfer it over to school computers, it messed up. So, Part one coming soon! ><

[Phayun-C]

That was the best sonic Fan-Fic I've ever read. Bravah, Fox!

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*Glare*

Uh, yeah. Turns out, my parnets are never letting me get on the computer in the house ever again, and refuse to save the story on a disk themselves, even though this is a grade for english. So, looks I'm going to have to type it again, which could take who-knows-how-long, and post it up here.

So, yay for parents who are complete somethings-I-can't-say-on-here.

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Well, here it is finnaly. I managed to get that version I had typed up, so, enjoy! ^^

...please?

Part One.


Fang the Sniper, referred to some as Nack the Weasel, sat slouched in a chair across a table from Dr. Ivo Robotnik, known to his enemies as Dr. Eggman, who had decided to take it up as a nickname. Personally, Fang thought this was the most ridiculous name any self-respecting person could go by, especially someone as feared and well-known as the Doctor was.

However, Robotnik had money. Crazy as he was, he was defiantly willing to spend some to get his way. Hence the reason Fang was there.

Fang loved money. In any shape, form, or fashion. He couldn’t get enough of it. Robotnik had usually been a large supplier of money, he had seemingly endless amounts of it. Fang took pleasure in knowing he had taken as much of it as he could, with or without consent from the Doctor, and he wasn’t planning on stopping now.

This time, Robotnik mentioned something he wanted Fang to do for him. Fang, knowing there’s money to be made, accepted Robotnik’s offer to meet him in his ‘lair’ of sorts, and discuss the details of the task.

“So,” Fang said, “What’s this ‘job’ ya got for me, Egghead?”

Robotnik took no notice to the latter part of this, and replied, “I brought you here, weasel, because you are the best at what you do. Besides having a,” he paused, grinning, “Nack of taking my money, that would be doing the dirty work.”

Fang didn’t return the grin. “I figured as much,” he said, then paused for a bit. “How much?” he asked finally.

“What do you mean?” Robotnik asked, acting clueless, still smiling.

“You know exactly what I mean, Egg-head, the money. Moolah, cash, the stuff that makes the world go ‘round. How much?” Fang said.

Robotnik leaned forward. “More than you can possibly imagine.” His grin grew wider.

Fang looked at him for a moment. Now the Doctor had his interest. “I dunno,” Fang said, “I can imagine quite a bit.”

The Doctor, still smiling, reached down and picked up a sack on the floor. He lifted it up, and set it on the table gently. “This,” he said, “Is but a fraction of the payment you will receive.” He gently pushed the bag, and it toppled over, spilling countless emeralds and diamonds of all sizes across the table. A beautiful blue Chaos Emerald slid to a halt in front of Fang. It wasn’t the only one, either. Fang saw at least two other emeralds.

Fang, mostly interested in the Chaos Emeralds, picked up the blue emerald in front of him. He examined it. ‘It’s real, alright,’ he thought. After looking at the emerald for a few moments longer, Fang looked back at Robotnik, now serious. “What’s the job, old man?”

“I want you…” Robotnik replied slowly, drumming his fingers together, “… to get rid of Sonic.”

“You mean kill ‘em, right?” Fang said. Robotnik nodded. Fang thought for a moment. “I don’t kill…" he said finnaly, "Trick, sabotage, capture. That’s what I do. I don’t kill.”

Robotnik continued smiling, expecting this. “Once that menace is gone, there will be nothing stopping me from conquering all of Mobius. Think about it. Who’s side do you want to be on when that happens? I’m offering you power beyond your wildest dreams. All that has to be done… is a bit of dirty work.”

Fang thought for a moment. He seemed to reconsider. “Ya sure there’s no other way?” he said, “I mean, sure he’s a real pain, yeah… but… kill him? Is that really, y’know, nessisary?”

“Yes. It is. There isn’t any other way to end this, all previous attempts to capture or subdue him have failed miserably, and it is time this is ended once and for all.”

Fang considered this, and stayed quite for a while, looking at the emerald. “Kay,” he said finally. “I’m in. What’s the plan?”

Robotnik smiled again and stood up. “Follow me,” he said, and walked over to the door. Fang stood up to follow him, and pocketed the emerald he was holding.

[Phayun-C]

Very nice stuff there, Fox. Especially the lame pun! Cracks me up =D

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Well, okay, at least I got one reader. I'll go ahead and post part two.


Part Two.

“Ah, what a nice day!” Sonic said, lying back on the wing of Tails’ biplane, looking towards the sky, watching the few clouds slowly float by.

“Isn’t it?” Tails replied. He was on the ground, making adjustments to the plane that Sonic didn’t even bother to understand. “Perfect weather for flying.” he said, looking up at Sonic, smiling.

Tails was so happy to finally get his plane out of the hanger. A storm had been going on for the past few days that made conditions too dangerous for flying. Now that it had stopped raining, and everything was dried up, he was going to do a few test flights.

Sonic jumped down, and looked at what Tails was doing. He had a panel opened, and the engine was exposed. Sonic looked at the complicated piece of machinery. “Whatcha doin’?” He asked finally, pretending to be interested. “Well,” Tails said, not taking his eyes of what he was doing, “I’m currently trying to hook up that chaos emerald power converter I’ve been working on for the past few days. I have to sync up the engine power output to the emerald power converter’s, so there isn’t an overload and the engine wouldn’t, y’know, explode.”

Sonic, hearing the word ‘explode’ said, “Well that would be bad.”

“Yeah it would,” Tails said, now almost leaning completely into the plane, so his voice had a metallic tone to it as it echoed around inside the fuselage. “Can you hand me that wrench, Sonic?” The metallic Tails voice asked. Sonic looked down, and saw a toolbox full of tools. He looked for a moment, and grabbled what he thought was most likely a wrench, and handed it to Tails. “Thanks,” Tails said, leaning farther in.

Sonic was tapping his foot by now. “When’re you gonna be done?” he asked, letting his impatience get to him. “Umm…” Tails said, “I dunno… could be as long as an hour, could be sooner.”

Sonic stood there, arms crossed, and foot tapping for a full ten seconds, whistled a bit, looked around, and then said, “Well… I’m gonna go see what everyone else is up to.”

“Alright,” Tails said, climbing back out of the plane. He looked at Sonic for a moment. “Umm…” he said, “T-tell Amy I said hi,” He became a bit flustered. “Heh, alright,” Sonic said, then gave Tails a big smile, and took off toward the direction of Central Square.

-A not-so-secret fact, was that Tails had a crush on Amy. As much as he tried to hide it from everyone, everyone but Amy seemed to know. Amy, however, had a very large crush on Sonic. And she defiantly wasn’t afraid of telling him. Tails would always try to impress Amy somehow, but he was no match for anything Sonic could do. Not that Sonic was competing for her, given how annoying she can be, Sonic defiantly wanted would like to stay away from her most of the time.-

The blue hedgehog sped through the forest, dodging trees, and jumping over logs. He decided not to take the train. He needed a good run.

It wasn’t long until the forest started to give way, a highway appeared, and the trees stopped passing by. Sonic ran by the side of the road, a major highway leading into Central Square, going easily three times as fast as any of the cars there. He quickly dashed across one side of the highway, weaving in and out of cars, and jumped on the concrete median.

He sped along the median, watching as the city grew bigger and bigger in front of him. He sped up, the air rushing past him visible now, and a building coming closer and closer. The building was merely meters away, when he jumped up, spin-dashed onto it, and ran straight up the side of it. He had slowed down considerably by the time he got to the top, and once he reached it, he jumped and landed on the roof softly.

He gazed down at the city below him, watching the cars slowly go by, the people walking on sidewalks, living their lives, doing what they do. Then he looked back toward the way he came, and smiled.

“I’ll never get tired of that.”



After having a bit more fun running around the city, Sonic finally arrived at Cream and Amy’s apartment, not too far into the city, located by the largest shopping mall. He walked up to the door, and rang the buzzer beside the name ‘Rose’. A few seconds later, Amy’s voice came through the intercom. “Yes?” it said, “Who’s there?”

“Hey Amy, it’s me.”

“SONIC!!” she screamed, and Sonic flinched. A bunch of odd noises came through, including Cream’s confused voice in the background. “Come in, Sonic!” Amy said finally.

Sonic sighed, then opened the door and walked inside. He climbed a story or two, and reached Amy’s number room number, 206. He reached up to knock, but the door swung inward before he could. Amy, who had opened the door, lunged out at him, and almost literally hugged him to death. “I knew you’d come to see me, Sonic!” she said, when in fact she had no idea he was coming. Cream, still inside, waved at him. “Hi Sonic!” she said cheerily.

“Hey you guys,” Sonic managed to say, with Amy practically choking him. She let him go finally, and pulled him inside quickly, shutting the door behind them.

“So…” she said, staring at him, “What’s the occasion, Sonic?” he backed up a bit, “Well,” he said, “I was wonderin’ if you wanted to go to the beach with-“ “THE BEACH?! Sonic wants to go to the beach with me?!” Amy practically screamed. She hugged him again (Sonic made an odd noise) and said, “Of course I will!”

Sonic struggled a bit, got to a point where he could actually say something, and said nervously, “I, uh, meant both of you… Tails is going too.” Amy froze, and let go of him. “Oh… Okay…” She said, visibly depressed.

Sonic quickly turned to Cream, “So, whaddya say?” Cream smiled at him, “We’d be happy to,” she turned to Amy, “It’s really nice out!” Amy suddenly cheered up again, “Yeah, sure!” she said, “Maybe Sonic and I can get some alone time.” She was staring at Sonic again.

Sonic let out a nervous laugh, “Heh, yeah… well, uh… I’m gonna go get the stuff, and get Tails to stop fiddlin’ with that plane. You guys get ready.”

“Okay,” Cream said, Amy just smiled at him. “Don’t be too long,” she said, “I’ll miss you too much.” Sonic let out another nervous laugh, and started making his way towards the door, then remembered. “Hey Amy, Tails says ‘hi!’ “

“Mm-hmm,” she said, barely paying any attention now. Sonic sighed, and walked back outside.

He stood there, on the sidewalk, thinking about the day ahead. He smiled. Beautiful day, the beach, hangin’ out with all his friends, and best of all, NO Eggman. Everything is perfect.

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Interesting................

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.... so that's all you have to say?

>.>

Can no one provide some decent criticism?

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Ok.... i won't even touch the overly numerous spelling errors, but... ah... fanfics are never really my... uh... forte? in critiquing? so uh... yeah... give me something to critique it against and sure